Okay, this was fucking awesome. I see some of the other reviewers are gettin on your case about the choppyness...but honestly I like it better that way. It works better with the music since the melody is kinda choppy and glitch hoppish. You did a damn good job. I especially liked how the characters popped against the background's contrasting color (saw it mostly in the outlines).

I also love the lack of voices and a cut to black with text, like a silent movie throwback. Adds to that dreamlike effect. Reminded me of the dreamlike sense in the last few episodes of Evangelion.

Your art style reminded me of shin chan for some reason, can't figure out why. Maybe it was the lack of noses.

Hope you make more!