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.Hidden from the outside world raiseud in secret Zeal and Godric twin brothers, just discover there was more to the world then they knew but only after experiencing the unexpected.

Chapter 1 I Promise

Deep within Thanrose forest near the mountains, two 15 year old boys were standing across from each other, both were in a stance which seemed like they were about to spare, as their mother was standing in the middle of them.

Their names were Zeal and Godric, Zeal standing at 5'2 had tan skin, slightly dark red eyes, pointy ears, fangs, and long jet black hair. He has a mark across the right side of his eye, two lines that are visible that run down his neck onto his body. Wearing a dark purple keikogi which was tattered, with red gloves. He was standing on the left side of his mother.

The other boy was called Godric, standing at 5'2 with tan skin, blue eyes, his hair was off white and cut short. Godric had identical markings on his face the same as his brother but on the left side of his face, he wore a keikogi which was the color white with tattered black gloves. He was standing on the right side of his mother.

Their mother whose name is Purnilla is seen wearing a long white robe with gold encrusted designs as well as gold rings around her wrists and ankles. Purnilla had a white gold neck that is infused in her upper chest bone , her eyes are golden, soft pale white skin and long silky blonde hair. She was 5'8 as she stood in the middle of her sons.

Zeal was smiling at his brother as his fangs showed, his brother grinned back turning his head as they begin sparing,

"that’s enough!" shouted Pernilla, as they stopped their punches before landing to each other's faces. As Godric bowed, his brother followed while pounding his fist. Just ending their sparing battle their mom asked them to come inside to get cleaned up and get ready for dinner. Godric and Zeal started making their way to the house.

Zeal: (In a joyful tone as he laughs). ‘Godric, that might be impossible, you have to defeat me first They both laugh as they enter the house to bathe. That Night at Dinner Zeal and Godric argued with each other over who will save their mother. Purnilla smiled and listened to both of them go back in fourth. Godric: No I’ll save mom Zeal: (Laughing at Godric) you couldn't save yourself if you were in trouble. I’ll be the one saving mom and you. Godric: (Yelling out loud) Well I promise to save you and mom if trouble comes Zeal: No (while yelling) I’ll be the one saving mom and you and I promise more QUIET!! shouted Purnilla Purnilla: if trouble happens to come I’ll be the one saving you both and I promise. They burst out laughing That morning Purnilla woke the boys asking them to go retrieve fresh water as she gave them each a small pouch that can hold up to two tons of water. This was the part of their training as she wouldn't expect them home until dinner. as. She just wished them the best of luck as she smiled. After finishing breakfast the boys walked off into the woods taking a shortcut to the end of the forest where they would retrieve the fresh water from the waterfall. After retrieving the water the boys found themselves in a unpleasant situation.

Zeal: Two tons what was she thinking I thought she love me Godric: We would have been home by now if you never would have dropped the pouch Zeal: Well sorry, maybe you forgot it weighs two tons, sorry if I’m not moving fast enough dear brother Godric: That's because your weak brother. Zeal: Your telling me I’m weak (laugh) you wouldn't have made it this far if i didn't toughen you up Godric: Coming from the guy who is having trouble. Rrrite..I don't know what's harder getting this water back home or your complaining The sun was setting as the boys were getting close to home. Suddenly bursting through the top of the house destroying the ceiling completely and half of the house with it, leaving the front side of the house intact landing in the liver-room floor. Purnilla shocked turns around as she was in the kitchen preparing dinner, just a few feet away was this black figure with glowing red eyes glaring at her as the black smoke repel of his body begins walking towards her. Pernilla looked up gazing upon this figure...Zeal hearing a big bang coming towards the house dropped his pouch & immediately ran towards the house bursting through the front door shouting loudly, "get away from my mother!" without haste running toward the black figure nearly connecting a punch to his upper body in an instant crash he continue flying through the wood. (unaware) Moving at a great speed as his crash the mountain wall landing about several miles away Zeal laid unconscious. As Godric seen this standing outside the house, Purnilla quickly started speaking to Godric telepathically now, warning him to take his brother and run for only showing himself now will only put him at great harm. Godric eyes begin to water. Godric: No ..I ..I promise I would save you...I promise Purnilla: No Im promise to protect you and as your mother I will (Tears begin falling down Godric face) Wiping away his tears Godric started runing towards the house only a few feet away. As Purnilla approached the black figure it started speak My name is Adeth, I've been looking for you..Purnilape Quickly grabbing her. Adeth: Its time to return Home Purnilla: So I guess power wasn't enough for you. looking at his hand revealing it was an illusion Adeth smirked. A big flash of light burst out covering the forest as Godric was just a few feet away from the house. Now finding himself in the dessert beside Zeal as he still remain unconscious unknowing what just happened. Only to find a note in his hand saying now promise me you will protect each other love you eternally sign mom. To be Continue...

Godric: it seems I’m getting better as this sparing thing Z, soon I just might be able to defeat mom one of these days